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Inconspicuous my rhymes is despicable


My rhymes is spiritually uplifted


It was GODS power which made me so gifted


I’m tired of listening to all these so called gangstas and thugs


But all they really need is a great big giant hug


I’m tired of deez rappers always talking bout b dis and b dat


But whatcha really need to do is be like a holy teen gangsta &


Make up a creative and descent rap


It could be spiritually uplifted, but in gods eyes we’re all specially gifted…


 


can n e of u think of sumthin like tht off the top of ya head in 30 sec naaa i aint think so



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Cadillacmikey09


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I Could Drop the beats and be lyrical


my flow is descent wit out being spiritual


the gift of rap like me is a MIRICLE


and I do believe in em


cause dudes live like every day wit diseases in em


while I party over seas wit Air force ones and denim


so dont tell me about god


just cause I dont pray when life gets hard


just get up from the rubble


and move on to the day 2 day struggle


aint concerned wit drugs


but aint the type of dude that preach the word to thugs


dont give hugs


but to my homies I do spread luv


let that b known


cause ill live like that till im grown


but at 14 i still hold my own


but still remember my home


and what I was tought


if u dont do crime u cant get caught


but I do like to listen


thats how I know sumwhere  in tha book  my life is written


the ups and downs


the times I smile the times I frown


from the first steps till im under the ground


from sunrise till sundown


Im a put the gundown


and live 4 what its worth pound for pound



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Cadillacmikey09 wrote:

I Could Drop the beats and be lyrical my flow is descent wit out being spiritual the gift of rap like me is a MIRICLE and I do believe in em cause dudes live like every day wit diseases in em while I party over seas wit Air force ones and denim so dont tell me about god just cause I dont pray when life gets hard just get up from the rubble and move on to the day 2 day struggle aint concerned wit drugs but aint the type of dude that preach the word to thugs dont give hugs but to my homies I do spread luv let that b known cause ill live like that till im grown but at 14 i still hold my own but still remember my home and what I was tought if u dont do crime u cant get caught but I do like to listen thats how I know sumwhere  in tha book  my life is written the ups and downs the times I smile the times I frown from the first steps till im under the ground from sunrise till sundown Im a put the gundown and live 4 what its worth pound for pound
that was pretty good man im julissa the one who juss wrote the one rite above u. ur pretty good. im 14 too i jus started freestylin and my stuff isnt all that...lol...

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JULISSA
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YOU MAY CALL IT PREACHIN/BUT I THINK OF IT AS SPIRITUAL TEACHIN/FOR ALL THESE WANNABES TALKING ABOUT KEEPIN IT REAL/ WELL AINT KEEPIN IT REAL THE SAME THING THAT GOT BIGGIE AND 2PAC KILLED/MAN YA REALLY NEED TO STOP AND THINK/CUZ WITHOUT GOD U CANT FIGHT THE BATTLE CUZ UR SHIP IS GONNA SINK...


TOOK ME ABOUT 1 MINUTE TO THINK OF THT


 



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i know alot about god / and ive seen death pain love and all/ i can speak the gossipl/ even throw dwn a rap with out even bein hostile/ or take a battle against me without holn grudge/ guess what only god can judge/ people speak about things that are so irrelavent/ talkin about they pop guns, buy drugs and start sellin/thinkin that / thats the way to go/ but i gotta tell ya ur walkin in a path alone in the darkness of the unknown/ speakin to ur self/ thinkn no one there to help so u put ur faith on the shelf/ but all u gotta really do is jus believe/ and remember gods with u and hes with me....


 


holla back genecyde da biological weapon


 



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Cadillacmikey09


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   Thanks Juliissa for the props,comments etc.


    I dont like to to brag but I do think that that had to be one of my best


    didnt think it would be great but I did intend for it to b good


 


  I  Sound like I won an oscar


   



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hey this is julissa u welcome.. i think all of u r good at rappin cuz the more i read other pplz rap the more i learn so its all god cadillacmikey

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while you checkin out god for some mutha****in answers/


ask him why my friends 4 year old boy has cancer/


till then im on a rampage causin disasters/


see me on the streets or you can watch it on the news after/


real mutha****a who be spittin up rapture/


lead the sheep to crack pastures/ guard em w/ the gauge/


**** the wanted ads my face be on the front page/


slangin on the corner eyes watchin for jakes/ 


**** the city that you claim and the pl. you was raised/


doin my dirt i clogged the vacuum but the **** doesnt phase/ 


I got kids - bids and clips the gift to leave you in a daze/



 


when im standin over the stove you get recordin on that tape/ 


 


Take a ½oz of yay and I turn it to a cake/



 


my friend bakin soda be makin extra weight/ 


 


nowadays I serve the raw uncut the fiends amazed/



 


assorted flavored crack givin junkies their favorite taste//


                                                                               


….DOGG


im just waitin on verification to claim my fame/



 


doggtreatz bitch you’ll remember the name/        



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Anonymous wrote:

YOU MAY CALL IT PREACHIN/BUT I THINK OF IT AS SPIRITUAL TEACHIN/FOR ALL THESE WANNABES TALKING ABOUT KEEPIN IT REAL/ WELL AINT KEEPIN IT REAL THE SAME THING THAT GOT BIGGIE AND 2PAC KILLED/MAN YA REALLY NEED TO STOP AND THINK/CUZ WITHOUT GOD U CANT FIGHT THE BATTLE CUZ UR SHIP IS GONNA SINK... TOOK ME ABOUT 1 MINUTE TO THINK OF THT  
is a man , they may lose, I saw the data were the I SHUT THAT BULLSHIT UP PUNK IM YOUNG KHAOS MIDWEST IS WERE ITS AT CHUMP BETTER MOVE BEFORE THE PUMP JUMP TURN YO PUSSY ASS LIKE U ARE A FUCKIN WASTE OF CUM CEA


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Anonymous

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its good man but i wanna step up

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Anonymous

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yo the rhymes i'm spitting its insane pop shyt homie put a glock to yo brain gonna inflect some pain all these bitches be tripping they jus jealouse cuz they aint got the rhymes that i'm spitting bitches keep talking bitches keep triping lay a mutha fuka out if i catch em slippin these words that i'm ce spiting aint close the glock i be gripping test me son its gonna be bullets u shyting bust u in da face wit dis deck thas what u get fo not showing any respect



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so what u think of my rhyme?


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